Doug is cool!
Ebba is cool!
Sofie is cute !
P.S. Sofie's very
very cute
and cool and smart
訳
Dougは素敵！
Ebbaは素敵！
Sofieはかわいい！
追伸 Sofieはとってもとってもかわいくて、素敵で頭がいい
講評
若者らしいストレートな発想で自分の親・姉妹を賞賛し、それ以上にみなぎる自信を無駄のない表現で言いきっていると思います。
Review
She expressed her respect to her father and a sister with her great self-confidence. She successfully expressed her self-respect with perfect and brief expression.
Greatest battle from JSPS interview to AGU Fall meeting 201X
Dr.(unknown) v.s. Run
(Greatest Earth Scientist) (A poor PhD student who was exiled from J.p.n)
Cooling:10^4 years
crystallization°assing-negligible ← not. SIGNIFICANT INFLUENCE
訳(諸般の事情により省略)
講評
あまつさえ世界トップクラスのサイエンティストへの挑戦を教授の部屋の前*1のホワイトボードに書き散らす大胆不敵かつ幼稚な作者の精神を体現したものと言えます。ところどころミススペリングが散見されるなど、今後の鍛錬が必要といえるでしょう。
Review
How dare he can be rude so far! He declared his challenge to the opinion of a greatest earth scientist on a whiteboard in front of his adviser's room. His childish mentality clearly appears on this expression. He need to improve his education because a lot of mistakes can be seen in this writing.
*1:読んだ教授が絶叫したのは言うまでもありません
